Write about something well done. What did you learn from this group? What part of the Presentation seemed the best?
Is there constructive criticism that would help this group? What might have been more clear? What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?
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I think both of you knew your information very well. I think that only thing you did poorly and that could use improvement is to not stand and be so stiff while talking, and relax more and do more body language. Overall I really like your presentation.
ReplyDeleteYou showed that he is a business man instead of just a music mogul. He does influence many teenagers and people that listen to his music. The negative is his music also. Degrading women and drinking heavily.
ReplyDeleteThe positive and negative influences were very clear and distinguishable, the only negative factor I have is when the video wouldn't load.
ReplyDeleteI didn't know that Kanye had his own fashion line, so that was new information to me. I felt that you guys did a good job on giving us real information on Kanye and describing his negative influences.
ReplyDeleteWhat I liked most about this presentation was all the information that was packed into it. I think the best part of the presentation was about his lyrics and songs. I never liked Kanye West but I never watched or listened to his music and it was eye opening to see so much arrogance. I really don't have much criticism about the presentation except that there were a lot of little facts, which I liked, but I think that some of the parts of the presentation could have been taken a little further with explanation like Kanye vs. Tupac.
ReplyDeleteYou guys did a good job explaing what he was all about and all what his song were about. I did not know he had his own clothing line and was going to open his own restraint. I feel like you both really knew a lot about him and did a good job presenting.
ReplyDeleteGood presentation. I liked the comparison to Tupac. I didn't get the comparison at first, but once you explained it was a matter of legitimacy it made sense. I also like how you pointed out the negative impacts icons like Kanye have on kids.
ReplyDeleteou guys did a good job of explaining about him and his comparisons. Alos about explaining the video
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