Monday, November 19, 2012

Comments for Ashley and Kristen

For your comments on Presentations:

Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

Is there constructive criticism that would help this group?  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?

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7 comments:

  1. The way you showed the negative factors is well done. It does effect the teenage society. It shows them that working out all day and tanning are important in life. They actually proposed a law against filming reality tv in New Jersey because of snooki.
    http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/09/24/snooki-law_n_1910850.html

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  2. I thought you guys did a really good job of describing the different negative influences the show has. You guys were really able to explain the show and what happened on the show to us for us to put it in perspective.

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  3. The presentation was well done regarding the everyday lives of these people during the show. I was a big jersey shore fan because of how dumb and crazy they were, but that's not good reasons i know. For someone who never heard of Jersey Shore, i think you two did a very good job explaining. What could have been done better was to give more information about each cast member. This would have been more entertaining and we could know more about how influential each person was as their own.

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  4. I learned that there are positive factors to Jersey Shore because if someone would have asked me if that show was a positive or negative influence on society I would have said negative hands down. The part of the presentation that I liked the best was when the casts actions were explained kind of, when it was said that they are really close kind of like a family. A little criticism would be to maybe have a little more information. I knew most of what was said so maybe an addition of more facts about the show or the cast would have made the presentation a little better.

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  5. I feel like you did a good job showing the negative factors of the show and what really does go on. I did not know that the situation was making that much money and that he was that popular.

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  6. I've never seen the show, but I know about it's reputation. I feel you did a good job of summarizing the show and the general effects it has on its audience. I'd agree with Dillon and Danielle that more detailed information on the specific themes and characters of the show that have positive/negative influence would help give the presentation some debth. Things like the abreviations used on the show probably aren't very relevent to the presentation.

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  7. You did a very god job explaining the show i have never seen it before. Also that only one person is actually from New Jersey

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